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Fatal Fury

VJchallenge, creative writing, humour, poetry, relationship, writing50 word Thursday, alligator, death, funny, swamp7 Comments

Really wasn’t your fault
this fury that overcame –
Words evoked onslaught,
a raging river of pain.

Didn’t mean to push you,
miscalculated my aim,
swimming in swamp waters
not a recommended game.

You floundered, gurgled,
cursed me by name –
our love story, now viral
brought an alligator fame.

( A silly ditty for Deb Whittam’s 50 word Thursday. )

7 thoughts on “Fatal Fury”

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Deb Whittam says:

July 29, 2018 at 8:56 pm

Now that was fun … I loved it. 😉

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  July 29, 2018 at 9:19 pm
  
  You are bringing out my darker side, Deb. Pretty scary, lol.
  
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  1. Deb Whittam says:
    
    July 29, 2018 at 9:23 pm
    
    But your writing great pieces – I’m really enjoying them 🙂
    
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  2. V.J. Knutson says:
    
    July 29, 2018 at 9:31 pm
    
    Always good to stretch ourselves, right? Thanks, Deb.
    
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Dorinda Duclos says:

July 29, 2018 at 2:47 pm

Oh my goodness! You have to watch out for gators lol 🐊

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  July 29, 2018 at 3:46 pm
  
  Ha ha – yes, you do!
  
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